<article_title>Barry_Bonds</article_title>
<edit_user>TonyTheTiger</edit_user>
<edit_time>Thursday, April 17, 2008 10:44:15 PM CEST</edit_time>
<edit_comment>/* Personal life */ rearrange</edit_comment>
<edit_text>Personal life
Barry met Susann (&quot;Sun&quot;) Margreth Branco, the mother of his first two children, in in August 1987. They eloped in February 51988. They had two children (Nikolai and Shikari)&lt;ref name=GAsdpa&gt;&lt;/ref&gt; and separated in June 1994, divorced in December 1994 and had their marriage annulled in 1997 by the Catholic Church.&lt;ref name=BaLBMP&gt;&lt;/ref&gt; The divorce was a media affair because Bonds had his Swedish spouse sign a prenuptial agreement in which she &quot;waived her right to a share of his present and future earnings&quot; and which was upheld. Bonds had been providing his wife $20,000/month in child support and $10,000 in spousal support at the time of the ruling.&lt;ref&gt;&lt;/ref&gt; During the heaings to set permanent support levels, allegations of abuse came from both parties.&lt;ref&gt;&lt;/ref&gt;&lt;ref&gt;&lt;/ref&gt;&lt;ref&gt;&lt;/ref&gt; The trial dragged on for months, but Bonds was awarded both houses and reduced support.&lt;ref&gt;&lt;/ref&gt; <strong><strike>

Bonds lives in San Francisco with his second wife, Liz Watson, and their daughter Aisha. He also owns a home in the exclusive gated community of [[Beverly Park]] in [[Beverly Hills]], CA.  He also has two children, Nikolai and Shikari, from his first marriage to Sun Bonds.&amp;lt;ref&amp;gt;{{cite news|url=http://sfgate.com/cgi-bin/article.cgi?f=/e/a/1995/03/28/NEWS6252.dtl&amp;amp;hw=barry+bonds&amp;amp;sn=098&amp;amp;sc=251|title=Giants star defends prenuptial agreement|accessdate=2007-10-10|date=[[1995-03-28]]|author=Brazil, Eric|publisher=Hearst Communications Inc.|work=sfgate.com}}&amp;lt;/ref&amp;gt; </strike></strong>
Bonds remarried on January 101998 in the San Francisco Ritz-Carlton Hotel in front of 240 guests.&lt;ref name=BaLBMP/&gt; Bonds lives in San Francisco with his second wife, Liz Watson, and their daughter Aisha. He also owns a home in the exclusive gated community of Beverly Park in Beverly Hills, CA.&lt;ref name=GAsdpa&gt;</edit_text>
<turn_user>TonyTheTiger<turn_user>
<turn_time>Thursday, April 17, 2008 11:32:57 PM CEST</turn_time>
<turn_topicname>GA Fail (March 2008)</turn_topicname>
<turn_topictext>"In 1986, Bonds finished 6th in Rookie of the Year voting, hitting 16 home runs and stealing 36 bases. He hit 25 home runs in his second season, along with 32 stolen bases and 59 RBIs. Bonds improved in 1988, hitting .283 with 24 home runs. Bonds started off his 1989 campaign well, but tapered off quickly, finishing with 19 homers and 58 RBIs." - Source?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 03:51, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
The vast majority of the "San Francisco Giants (1993–2007)" section needs a lot more sources.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 18:10, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
"2005 season" part needs a lot more sources.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 20:37, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
The vast majority of the "2006 season" part needs more sourcing.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 21:26, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
"2007 season" part looks OK with sources, but this part needs source: "Bonds concluded the 2007 season with a .276 batting average, 28 home runs, and 66 RBIs in 126 games and 340 at bats. At the age of 43, he led both leagues in walks with 132."--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 12:13, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
Need source for the last part of the "Players' Union" section.Could not find source, but hid text in comments.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 21:42, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
"Bonds on Bonds" needs sourcing and a little expansion.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 22:05, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
"Personal life" needs expanding to at least a decent paragraph. --TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 23:32, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
Where do all the facts from the "Career Distinction" section come from? Needs sourcing.
We don't need that many links in the "See also" part IMO.I have removed the only two that don't have articles. I think everyone on any of the remaining lists should have it linked in their see also section.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 22:12, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm failing the article, as finding sources for some of these may take quite a bit of time. Re-nominate at WP:GAN when the problems have been rectified. Regards, D.M.N. (talk) 14:34, 25 March 2008 (UTC)</turn_topictext>
<turn_text>"Personal life" needs expanding to at least a decent paragraph.</turn_text>